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A blizzard storming inside of me

Tearing me apart, piece by piece

Lightning striking my mind

Stunning and burning my thoughts up

Rain pouring on my heart

Drenching it with the remnants of the burned thoughts

Hail crashing down on my consciousness

Slowly draining my vision away

Snow falling on my emotions

Making them unclear as a desert devoid of snow

An icy mask forming on my face

Hiding who I really am and what I feel inside

Unclear voices dwelling throughout my entire corpse

They form icicles all over

I'm freezing from the inside

And it's all taking me over



I'm falling...

Someone...

Help...

Light a flame...
It's heavily storming outside and that's inspired me to make this. I hope you enjoy.
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PetalRain Jan 7, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Very nice! I really like how you describe the snow, and that snowstorm in October...losing power sucked
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:iconkyuzeth:
Thank you very much~ ^^
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:iconpetalrain:
PetalRain Jan 7, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
You're welcome ^_^
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Clowcardruler Jan 5, 2012  Student Digital Artist
very moving, I can feel the emotion
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:iconkyuzeth:
Thanks, it's good you do. ^^
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Clowcardruler Jan 6, 2012  Student Digital Artist
:)
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AcidicStormclouds Jan 5, 2012  Student Writer
Dude... amazing. :O
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:iconkyuzeth:
Thank you, broski. ^^
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AcidicStormclouds Jan 6, 2012  Student Writer
No prob! n-n
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